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It was a bright sunny day on the coast of Southern California. I was at the beach with my friends, who were playing around in the water on surfboards and boogie boards . All of a sudden we saw this bird, it was big, like a dinosaur. Unexpectedly it took a dive for the the water, we did not know what it was doing, but the whole beach was frightened. People stated to scatter out of the water and ran towards their cars. Once it reached the water it dove into it like a submarine. It didn’t come up for about two minutes. Again and again it kept diving into the water. About three years later this unsolved mystery was solved. Scientists found out that it was a dinosaur that was thought to be extinct for millions of years. It was the only one left of its kind and has been living for seven million years. That day was the most interesting yet scariest day of my life.